the brink | poetry

5.01.2015


ombre & somewhat transparent. like
bubble wrap but ever so slightly
deflated, a string quartet sans violin or
a fashionista with unpolished nails.

some sort of shady phantom,
perpetually woeful,
who stood alone at the brink of normal &
imaginary.

just a spot of poetry to break my blogging fast. I hope you enjoyed it! xx

41 comments :

  1. woah. that just completely blew me away. how do you do it, girl? ^-^

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  2. I love it <3 you're very talented.

    - Ellie

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  3. Woah. I cannot even believe how good that is. Fabulous job!!

    xoxo

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  4. Wow, this is lovely. You have a way with words. :)

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  5. First off, I love the picture.
    Second, your writing is amazing!
    I'm holding a writing contest and I think your writing is definately amazing. Here's the link if you're interested:
    http://afallingstar123.blogspot.com/2015/04/a-falling-stars-writing-prompt-contest.html
    ~Emily

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    1. thank you!! I will check out your contest for sure!

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  7. Very good writing, my brother!

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    1. Thank you! (You might want to check the gender, though)

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    1. It is, isn't it? Unfortunately, it isn't mine - I found it on Pinterest.

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  9. these are such lovely images- i especially loved the comparison to an ombre like phantom. Beautiful.

    xo marlen
    Messages on a Napkin

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  10. It's beautiful. B e a u t i f u l.

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  11. Post once again, dearest brother.

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  13. Wow that's an amazing piece of writing xx :)
    http://agirlblogx.blogspot.co.uk/

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  14. u write really well! loved ur blog :)

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